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Fallen

DrummerWench - 15 Jul 08 - 10:32 PM

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Excellent update, Aliana!

Your story and characters are so strong.  You keep the tension up very well.  I have really enjoyed this tale!

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Fallen

DrummerWench - 28 Jan 12 - 9:56 AM

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Your recent updates are so lovely and touching.  The story and different characters with their fraught or less so relationships are just as compelling as always.  I love the continuing development of your MC, and her aspirations.  What a terrific job!

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Fallen

Aliana - 29 Jan 12 - 2:48 PM

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Thanks, DW!  Glad you're still enjoying the character and relationship development.

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DrummerWench - 02 Mar 12 - 9:07 PM

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Congratulations on finishing! (Though I am sorry I'll not be seeing any more updates.)  This is such a terrific tale--loved the characters, plot, dialog, interactions.  Great job all round!

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