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Forlorn Hope

Chris - 18 May 06 - 12:18 PM

Ch. 1: Forlorn Hope

What a powerful piece. It so clearly and poignantly evokes the scene of Farimir leading those riding out of the city. I particularly like "Soon to be wreathed not with flowers, But necklace and crown of rubies." It reminds me of Dave Carter. Really well done, Chris

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