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Perfect Match, The

Eirene - 20 Mar 09 - 6:02 AM

General Comment

Ho, ho, hot! Excuse me while I scoop up my melted brain.

Your prose is very engaging, whether it's narrating a cricket game, poetically describing a garden at dawn, or revealing to a breathless reader the intimacy of two who have wanted each other for a very long time.

Great characterisation, fun plot and satisfying ending. :D

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