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Dragon Gem, The

MiniFruitbat - 11 Sep 06 - 10:46 PM

General Comment

A cute little canon-filler! I liked how there was that slight element of magic weaved into the dragon bones without it seeming awkward or contrived. Good writing, and a fine depiction of the Laketown settlement and likely events after Smaug's demise.

One thing I noticed - the constant switch between Guilin and Duilin. Something to alter?

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Dragon Gem, The

demeter d - 21 Sep 06 - 8:56 PM

Ch. 1: The Dragon Gem

How charming!  She did more than many had done, and came back to tell about it. And her antagonist became her husband!

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