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Night and Fog

curiouswombat - 20 Mar 10 - 11:03 AM

General Comment

It seems late to be the first comment on a story written years ago; and yet it is so well written, with such a sense of tension and horror, that I want to just say 'Well done!'

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Night and Fog

Elena Tiriel - 20 Mar 10 - 7:28 PM

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Oh my, Azalais!

This is so creepy, it gave me shivers.... You get the real sense of how incredibly reluctant the speaker is to stir up such horrific memories.

I appreciate how much canon you subtly weave into the story -- the Black Breath, the terror even when they are invisible and unclad, the rendezvous, the time when the Witch-king began to sense Frodo's presence in the Morgul Vale......

Very well done!

- Barbara

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Night and Fog

thelauderdale - 21 Mar 10 - 1:53 PM

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Oh, this *was* creepy.  I'm glad that curiouswombat reviewed it or I might not have come across it otherwise.  Liked the author notes as well!

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