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Very Dark, Very Wet, and Very Miserable Morning, A

Elena Tiriel - 12 Oct 07 - 11:01 PM

Ch. 1: A Very Dark, Very Wet, and Very Miserable Morning

Oh, Thundera, I don't even know where to start with this story!

I adore the tone of wry understatement to underline the mounting panic of your POV character.... and some of his observations are just hysterical!

It was rather unprecedented, really.

For a moment, Abunai was tempted to say that it had been a bat.... Bats were acceptable inhabitants of dungeons.

...we have also learned that Shelob's offspring are much more difficult to control....

My reaction ranged from evil grin to astonished chuckles to out-and-out hysterical laughter....

Very nicely done, Thundera!

- Barbara

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