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Shards of Time

oshun - 14 Feb 06 - 2:58 PM

Ch. 6: Chapter Six

I very much liked this story and Barahir. I felt like it could have been developed even more--but that is for you to know. The development of the characters, old and new, is great. The old lady of Rohan is particularly well done.

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Shards of Time

MissMilton - 17 Feb 06 - 3:17 AM

Ch. 6: Chapter Six

Hi heartofoshun,

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm very glad you enjoyed the story and the character development. As for further details, you may like to know that I'm planning on writing at least two more stories about Eowyn (she's one of my favourite characters), which should help give a more complete picture of her personality.

Thanks again for reading and reviewing.


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