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Amid the Powers and Chances of the World

rinlossien - 14 Aug 08 - 9:56 PM

Ch. 33: The Setting Sun, The Rising Sun

Another chapter!  I am rich beyond measure.  It works, on a bunch of levels, but though I know what comes next, canon-wise, at least, I'm left feeling quite desperate to know what comes next for Rowanna and Legolas. As I tell my wanna-be 'tween, it's much more intriguing than knowing all.

The grand realization scene was very well done, accurate both to the characters and to the rest of your story (and to cannon, too, I think). It was almost surprisingly real, a scene between real, grown-up people who, in the pause before the storm starts pounding again, discover an amazing, wonderful thing. Finally, hurrah!

Thanks for a great read, and please, be kind and generous to your muse so she'll treat you in a similar manner.

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Amid the Powers and Chances of the World

Azalais - 15 Aug 08 - 12:59 PM

Ch. 33: The Setting Sun, The Rising Sun

I'm left feeling quite desperate to know what comes next for Rowanna and Legolas

Author rubs hands with evil glee Devilish What a gratifying effect to be having on my readership. I promise to do my very best not to leave you hanging for too long!

The grand realization scene was very well done, accurate both to the characters and to the rest of your story

Phew. I realised after writing this chapter that the rest of this fic could potentially be quite nerve-wracking to post - after all, I've spent 30-something chapters leading up to the Fine Romance; what on earth is going to happen if you guys feel it wasn't worth the wait when we get there?

Finally, hurrah!

And so say all of us Smile Except possibly the Despite-It-Being-A-Romance section of the readership. I can't quite believe the blessed thing has finally got this far.

I'm going to respond in more detail to this and your Forum comment together, over on the forum... Thank you for such lovely feedback!

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