Gacela of the stolen Sun: 1. Gacela of the stolen Sun

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1. Gacela of the stolen Sun

Green, lady, the green of your hands
winding in the branches on the
blind, separate dark.

And green, lady, the green in your hair,
like the pennants in the stone city,
hides its colour in
the liquid Moon

My lady, remember when we
rode in the woods
and tall were the lebethron
spreading their late crowns,
their branches barely touching,
like young lovers.

And when we rode
from the hilly vales I said:
Lo! my love, here is the River.
In Ithilien the River
is cold and wide.

In Ithilien the River
is the lover
who will not stay. On its white breast
the years are flowing by.

My lady, you are in loveliness to me as the
broad-leaved woods to the deer,
or the pebbled banks of Anduin to the leaping trout,
summer after summer.

Yet I love you better
than I love all this land.

In the days of Shadow
under the trembling sky
all you asked of me were words.
I say this now.

Before the Dread Beast you unfurled
your hair, cold and bright,
glittering when the Sun had gone out.
Fair and fell you were, and savage was
your heart among the rising smoke.
But no words of praise are these,
for I saw you not that day.

In the fields of Edoras where the Sun
beats down on the bending grass,
where the unlettered plowmen sing from their
long memories,
your glory is everlasting.

But in the morning you smile beneath the
eaves of my house, and the
River is seized, and leaves halted in their falling,
and the Sun
is plucked from the sky.

Gacela - gazelle, a poetic series by Lorca.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: losselen

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: 4th Age

Genre: Poetry

Rating: General

Last Updated: 11/25/13

Original Post: 06/09/13

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