Seven Deadly Sins: 8. Sloth: Never More to Wake on Stony Bed (Frodo)

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8. Sloth: Never More to Wake on Stony Bed (Frodo)

Can't go on. Weary, weary to the bone, so cold, so tired. No thought, no will, nothing but a shell. You are nothing. The relentless voice which once whispered now hammers in his head. Nothing, a speck, a maggot crawling over the surface of a dead land. Give up your pathetic shred of a life and die now. Why prolong the pain, the senseless effort, only to  perish later? When you could sleep now... sleep forever?

Stop. No more. So tired.

Yet in the night's darkest depths he dreams... of the Shire in springtime.

I can manage it. I must.

~~~

Author's note: This drabble should be read bearing in mind the medieval understanding of the Seventh Deadly Sin, acedia or spiritual discouragement, also linked to Tristitia or sorrow/despair, as well as the modern meaning of "sloth".


This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Azalais

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - Ring War

Genre: Drama

Rating: General

Last Updated: 01/13/12

Original Post: 05/18/11

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Seven Deadly Sins

ziggy - 28 May 11 - 1:53 AM

Ch. 8: Sloth: Never More to Wake on Stony Bed (Frodo)

You really pinned down the characters in this- wherre they were most vulnerable. As always, very well crafted writing 


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