Pelargir: 15. March 9, 3019: Coil

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15. March 9, 3019: Coil

"Maybe we deserve the guards," she'd said yesterday, and meant it, but Šuraš hadn't thought murder would justify her.

Or that Ba-a-šuvon might.

"Dhauroš is our friend," Father argued. "Dhiav's death – "

"Redeems his father's shame. Dhauroš loves another sun – I'll not mourn!"

Since arguments ended violently lately, Šuraš retreated to kitchen chores.

"What if someone takes to Ba-šu like to Dhiav?" Ihna'a worried, as they scrubbed pots.

"He'd have a fight then," Šuraš sighed. Silence, then:

"He'll break with Father for murder," Ihna'a muttered fearfully.

"Hush!" she rebuked. Ihna'a flushed.

But when Ba-a-šuvon departed stormily later, tears stung Šuraš's eyes. 

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Dwimordene

Status: General

Completion: Ongoing Serial

Era: 3rd Age - Ring War

Genre: Drama

Rating: Adult

Last Updated: 12/18/10

Original Post: 12/05/10

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