The Battle of the Kitchens: 1. The Battle of the Kitchen

Reader Toolbox   Log in for more tools

1. The Battle of the Kitchen

I was plucking a newly slaughtered fowl for tonight's dinner when the argument between Cook and Under-Cook reached its loudest.  Three of the younger apprentices stopped their tasks and scurried out of the way, as Cook began to bellow in Westron, and Under-Cook bellowed back in kind, but adding oaths in Rohirric that sounded most awful, not to mention impertinent. 

They'd been going at it for three days now. I think the trouble began when Cook, who had served for years in the Lord Denethor's kitchens in the City, had removed to Ithilien with our young lord and lady, and found that the Princess had brought an old servant along to be Under-Cook.  'Twas odd enough to have a man as Under-Cook, but this one had, as he constantly informed us, served the White Lady since she was a child, and knew what foods were proper for a Lady of the Mark.  Cook disliked taking guff from anyone, much less a horse-mad bumpkin as she sometimes called him.  This latest battle had erupted in the absence of Lady Inzilde, our Housekeeper; who usually enforced peace between them.  But she was laid up still with a chill that had become a bad hacking cough, and refused to return to her clean kitchen until the cough ceased. 

"Your dishes are fit only for your dirty old nag!"  yelled Cook.

"Warg-dottir!" shouted Under-Cook.  "I was cooking for the Lady Éowyn's moder and fader before you ever learnt to make those soppy, watery puddings of yours!  And say one more word about my mare, and I will make you eat that serving-spoon, Bikkjuna!"  He banged the wooden stump of his peg-leg on the floor.

Cook banged the serving ladle on the table, and rounded on him, looking like an angry stork.

Just then, the door to the main hall opened.   Our lord himself entered.  All noise suddenly ceased, save for the broom dropped by little Tarannon, the youngest of the apprentices. 

The kitchen seemed suddenly much smaller. 

"Master Aelbert, Mistress Saerwen; what grievance makes you shout so loudly as to be heard throughout the Hall?" Lord Faramir asked.  His voice was quiet, but it filled the kitchen.  I could tell he wasn't pleased.  So could Cook, who blushed.  I'd thought she had cold water in her veins instead of blood.

"My lord, she insults my horse and my cooking!"  Under-Cook blustered, his arms folded.  He was twice as broad as our Lord, who merely looked him over from head to toe, as if the Rohir had been as young as me or the other apprentices.

"And Mistress Saerwen?"  The Lord asked, well, more like he demanded; only he said it politely.

"My lord, this is the kitchen of your home, not some farm in the outlands of Rohan," Cook said, lifting her head as if she were a ladyship.  "Aelbert can cook, but his fare is worthy only of stable-boys and pig-tenders, not the Lord Steward of Gondor and his Lady."

Our Lord's face became even sterner than before.  I tried to make myself look smaller. I had heard tales of his father, the Lord Denethor, dismissing half the staff of his kitchens over one spill at table or tussle over supplies. 

"I must tell you all,"  the Lord began, gently-like; "How pleased my Lady and I have been with the progress of our home here in Emyn Arnen, how well you have served us as we all set down roots in a place not settled in so long, in a house that is still being built.  You came to us from the City, from farmsteads on the Pelennor, some as far as Lossarnach and Dol Amroth, and Rohan, and you all have worked hard and long."

"So it is with surprise that I hear such discord in my own household as would befit a nest of Orcs, not good folk of the Free Peoples," he went on.  "By rights, it would be your Lady who would address this matter, but she is indisposed."

"Oh, my lord, will she be all right?"  My own little sister, Merelin, piped up; for she adored our Lady; and dreamed of being her maid one day.

The Lord smiled down at her, his face softening a bit.  Whew!  I guess the brat's speaking out of turn didn't annoy the Prince much; though I doubted that Cook would approve. 

"As you know, the Lady Éowyn is with child," The Lord said.  We all knew; for it had been announced four weeks past, and there had been a feast that had lasted far into the night, with the Elf-lord Legolas, and the Lord Hurin, and even the Queen, attending. "She tends now to have some sickness in the morning.  Some foods do not sit well with her, and she is weary.  My Lady has asked me to settle the quarrel as I see fit."

He frowned as he looked upon all of us.  "I am most displeased that my Lady should be bothered, at such a time when she should be able to count on her house being in good order, by such ill temper as we have heard voiced within this kitchen."

His eyes seemed to stick all of us, boring into our hearts.  The Under-Cook bowed his head and even Cook looked dismayed.  "Forgive us, Lord," she said; "I would not trouble the Lady Princess for all the world.  But Aelbert started it; he will not take my orders, he insists on having his own way here." 

"Not so, you witch!" snapped Under-Cook.  "My lady Éowyn wanted her special buckwheat pudding, that I cook for her since she was little girl.  And you said she must not have it, that you knew her needs better than I!"

"Because you know nothing about the needs of a woman with child, old fool!"  Cook hissed back, very stork-like now.  "The sour cream and raisins in that pudding are too much for a woman in her condition, she will sick it back up, poor lady.  I've borne three strong sons and I know what kind of fare suits a pregnant woman's belly.  Just let me make her some good wholesome Gondorian porridge; I learnt it from Mag herself.  She used to make it for Lady Finduilas when she carried you, my Lord!"

"Enough!"  Our Lord's voice cut like a carving-knife.  "Both of you, be still and hear me."

Cook and Under-Cook stood very still.

"Mistress Saerwen, you speak of my mother and the goodness of the foods of Gondor.  The pregnant women of Rohan eat wholesome food of their own lands.  The Lady Eowyn has consulted with healers and her midwife in the matter of proper nourishment during this time.  I trust her judgment to order her meals."  The lord looked around at us all, those keen eyes of his stabbing us like knives.  "And so will all of you; whether she desires buckwheat pudding, or porridge, or tea with toasted bread." 

Aelbert made a sniggering sort of noise in his throat.  

"Lady Eowyn and I will countenance no discourtesy among our servants," The Lord went on, more gentle, but looking straight at Under-Cook.  "Be they from Gondor or the Mark.  I would have you all remember that the food of Rohan has not only nourished the valiant Riders who came to the aid of Minas Tirith in its darkest hour; the food of Rohan has also nourished your Lady.  I would hear no insult to the folk of Rohan or their food or the horses that brought them to deliver us on that dark morning.  Neither will I hear insult to Gondor or her people." 

"Cook, you invoke the name of Mag," The Lord said, going stern again.  "I have known her since I played at her feet as a child and ate the wonderful cakes she made for my brother and me.  And I know full well that she would never permit the meanness in her kitchen that I have heard here this eve."

Lord Faramir looked up and down the line.  They say he could read the hearts of men, and I truly believed it in that minute; looking up and seeing those bright grey eyes of his searching into mine like all my life was a book that he was opening.

"Anyone, be they of Gondor or Rohan, who does not wish to treat their fellow servants with respect may leave this house," the Prince finished.  "We come from many other places, but we are all of Ithilien now."  And with that, he turned and left the kitchen.

There was a sort of sigh heard 'round the kitchen.  Everyone was catching their breath, I guess.  Cook and Under-Cook sat down on opposite benches, looking tired. 

Maybe a minute later, Cook stood up and brushed her hands on her apron.  "Well now, we have a dinner to finish," she said.  "Let's be at it, then." 

The others dispersed, returning to their task.  Heading back to the fowl; I heard Cook's footsteps stop.  I couldn't help turning.  She had stopped by Under-Cook. 

"Master Aelbert, I did not mean to insult your horse," she said, kind of stiff-like.  "My brother is one of the grooms; and he has mentioned it is a good, gentle beast."

Under-Cook rose up heavily, making a big business of shifting his weight.  He finally answered:  "I should not have called you those names, Mistress Saerwen.  You are..."  He hemmed and hawed a bit.  "You are fairer than any Orc."  

"Well!"  She was surprised.  I couldn't help but giggle.  I supposed Cook was not ill-favored for an old widow.  She was over forty years, after all.  But Under-Cook was even older.   

Cook rounded on me right quick.  "Don't you have some chickens to finish plucking, girl?"   

I scurried back to the table, and my chore.  As I washed my hands again and set about plucking the bird, I heard Cook and Under-Cook talking about the buckwheat pudding that our Lady wanted.  Talking, not fighting!  And I thought of all I had heard about our Lord Prince.  Perhaps he was a wizard's pupil after all, for it surely had taken Magic to bring peace into our kitchen.



Author's Notes:


Mag the Cook is a delightful original character; and is mentioned here with her creator Annmarwalk's permission


Bikkjuna is, according to the Online Etymology Dictionary, Old Norse for female dog 

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Raksha

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: 4th Age

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 01/09/10

Original Post: 01/09/10

Go to The Battle of the Kitchens overview


WARNING! Comments may contain spoilers for a chapter or story. Read with caution.

The Battle of the Kitchens

DKP - 28 Jan 10 - 5:11 PM

Ch. 1: The Battle of the Kitchen

Raksha, this story is delightful on so many different levels.

The PoV is excellent, and excellently chosen. Her thoughts and feelings seemed spot-on and realistic to me, and I like that it is not one of the usual suspects.

The dialogue between Cook and Under-Cook is simply delicious. Both use perfectly-formed epitaphs (*big grin*) and the source of their disagreement - both in the specifics of this particular instance of it and the broader background of social/cultural clash - is also well chosen and believable.

But really, the tour de force of this piece is Faramir. The way you portray him, his impact on everyone in the room, his speech, how he handled the disagreement - impeccable! I love every moment of it! Some favorite phrases:

The kitchen seemed suddenly much smaller. 

"So it is with surprise that I hear such discord in my own household as would befit a nest of Orcs, not good folk of the Free Peoples,..."

like all my life was a book that he was opening

I supposed Cook was not ill-favored for an old widow.  She was over forty years, after all. 

*42-year old reader rolls eyes at that last perspective of young PoV character*

And then, of course, the struggle at the end for the two trouble-makers to find something nice to say about each other. *g*

This is now one of my favorite pieces of yours, and that's saying quite a lot! :)

The Battle of the Kitchens

Raksha The Demon - 28 Jan 10 - 6:06 PM

Ch. 1: The Battle of the Kitchen

Thanx for the lovely comments, DKP.  Actually, Faramir's handling of the 'battle' was the hardest part of it to write; because I felt it had to be just right.  I so appreciate your saying that I did him justice.

And I did have fun with the OC's.  And to my young narrator, I'd be positively ancient; and I'm older than 42. 

I'm pleased that you liked "Battle of the Kitchens"; thanx again!

Read all comments on this story

Comments are hidden to prevent spoilers.
Click header to view comments

Talk to Raksha

If you are a HASA member, you must login to submit a comment.

We're sorry. Only HASA members may post comments. If you would like to speak with the author, please use the "Email Author" button in the Reader Toolbox. If you would like to join HASA, click here. Membership is free.

Reader Toolbox   Log in for more tools