Búbhosh Búrz Balrog of Victory I Beg: 1. Please Let Me Win

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1. Please Let Me Win

Spread your burning wings about the place of my contest.
The hour is come.
My adversary leaps at me,
Hard as iron,
Fierce as fire,
While the avid whiplord waits
To see if I will fail.

In this stilled moment
Past victories speed to my thought:
The might made right;
Osgiliath on fire.
No death save slow.
And loud.

But now begins this night's challenge. As I fight
I love the power well who placed me here
To conquer slaves. Thanks.
And so for greater glory of my name
Dread Búbhosh Búrz enclose me in your clutch
I'll dedicate my victory to you.


1. búbhosh (Debased Black Speech) "great" - Ardalambion website
2. búrz "dark", (Black Speech, isolated from Lugbúrz, q.v.), burzum "darkness")

"Fiery the angels fell. Deep thunder rolled around their shores, burning with the fires of Orc." - Blade Runner movie, final ten minutes.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Chathol-linn

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - The Stewards

Genre: Poetry

Rating: General

Last Updated: 09/27/08

Original Post: 08/20/08

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