Drabbles: 21. Living rock

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21. Living rock

A stone has no heart, no feelings, it is said. Perhaps not, and yet...

I may have been before I became aware, but the first I know is change, separation… being.

Then becoming, changing again. Edges, slivers, grains of loss, and when it ends, I am yet somehow more than plain rock. I am also aware of not-me, for it is not-me that changes me. The not-me is also aware, I know, but unlike me. It makes others like me, and we are placed together.

Approval from the not-us, and then warm air and cool wind, and so we sleep.

We are woken by a swaying.

Then heat.

Too much heat.

Something in me cracks along a deep fault, yet I am still whole. Then a tearing away.

I am alone.

Cool air around me, until I strike something harder than I am, and the fault gives way. Parts of me break loose, scatter and are gone.

Cold liquid seeps over my surface, and widens the cracks of my fall, and I lose even more of myself.

Yet I still am, and I remember.

Deep they delved us, fair they wrought us, high they builded us; but they are gone.


The last line is a direct quote from The Fellowship of the Ring; the Ring goes south.

This double drabble was written for Maeglin's birthday. His request included:

...a story featuring 'nonstandard' sentient beings of Tolkien's world; e. g. dragons, vampires, werewolves, eagles, horses of the Mearas, etc. - but not  Men, Hobbits, Elves, Dwarves, Orcs, Trolls, Maiar, etc.  Any setting (either in place or time) is fine.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Nath

Status: General

Completion: Ongoing Serial

Era: Multi-Age

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 02/03/14

Original Post: 06/28/07

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