We've All Been Spoken For.: 4. My Mortal Love

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4. My Mortal Love

   When Arwen and I first met I doubt we consideredthe effect it would have upon those we knew, especially the on we both called Adar. I never knew our falling in love would cause him so much pain. But looking back upon it, it seems the most obvious thing. For over 20 years I had been his son, but in one instant I had become his daughter's executioner, her pledges to me a self-signed death sentance.

At first I did not know she was Elrond's daughter; her father and brothers had never mentioned her, for elves rarely speak about those who are absent. When I had first told Elladan and Elrohir about the beautiful Elf-maiden I had met in the woods, they laughed, until I mentioned that she was newly returned from Lothlorien, then their faces paled. 

Never had I seen so many emotions openly displayed upon my father's face as when he discovered our love. Grief, disgust, hate, pity. All flew across his face, lingering in his eyes. He rose, and in a low voice whispered "You know not what you have done".

At first I took his anger to be because I had stolen his daughter from him, but years later I realised it was because now he knew he would not have to watch one mortal child die, but two.


This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Peregrin Ionad

Status: General

Completion: Ongoing Serial

Era: Multi-Age

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 09/04/07

Original Post: 05/22/07

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We've All Been Spoken For.

RS - 03 Sep 07 - 7:41 PM

Ch. 4: My Mortal Love

These drabbles are beautiful...and heartbreaking.   Please continue!

We've All Been Spoken For.

Peregrin_Ionad - 04 Sep 07 - 3:33 AM

Ch. 4: My Mortal Love

Thanks RS,  it's great to know people are reading them! I tend to write them when the *inspiration* comes! ROTFLMAO

Peregrin Ionad


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