Spinning: 1. Spinning

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1. Spinning

On the distaff the knot of storm-grey fibers thinned as on the spindle the skein of silky thread fattened.

The color of his eyes. 

The slow rhythm of her hands and fingers, forming the fine strands, filled her days.

Too many days. 

The change had crept up on her.

Too many years

But not even a quarter of a yéni had in truth passed.

His heartbeat hovered at the horizon of her thought; she knew that the treacheries of mortality had not claimed him. 

But yet he does not come. What changes have the years wrought? Has another won his love?

The leaves had gilded, fallen, bloomed again, and yet again. Still he did not come. 

Is this how it will be? she wondered. Will that other part of my Elven blood count the days, the months, the year? Will I too change like the leaves in the seasons?

Impossibly long ago, when they had met under the trees in Rivendell, she had refused him. He had sworn he would seek her again, would again ask for her love. Now she dreamed of him at night. Her laughter fell silent. 

Day after day, at the loom in her grandmother's workroom, she wove the thread she had spun, passing the shuttle back and forth, her feet pressing the peddles to shift the warp. The silver-grey cloth lengthened. Again the leaves turned gold, fell, bloomed. He had not come.

A movement at the edge of her sight distracted her as the warden entered, seeking the Lady. "A Man is asking admittance to the Wood, my lady. He says he is lord of the Dúnedain, and he bears your brother's ring." 

"He is a friend, warden. Bring him to me."

Her blood surging, Arwen knew that nothing would ever again be the same.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Gandalfs apprentice

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - The Stewards

Genre: Drama

Rating: General

Last Updated: 07/22/06

Original Post: 07/22/06

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Casso - 11 Nov 07 - 12:37 PM

Ch. 1: Spinning

From where did he come?  Did he know she was there?  Does he have any idea that her heart has turned to him after all those years ago in Rivendell? Has he put his love for her aside as impossible? How does he handle her change of heart? 

How 'bout a flip side - Aragorns POV. 

If the last posted chapter of "Sword" ,was a turning point for that story, then things are about to turn again.

I love your stories.  I reread often and get a real thrill out of seeing something new posted.

Thanks a million.  Keep writing.


RS - 11 Nov 07 - 6:27 PM

Ch. 1: Spinning

HI Gandalfs apprentice!

Reading Casso's comment prompted me to read "Spinning" again.  And of course Arwen's anxiousness and excitement was contagious as the first time I read it!  I second Casso's motion.  What about Aragorn's POV.  Feel up to it?  And of course I always enjoy your stories!


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