Prisoner of Gondor: 5. 05 - An Eye for an Eye

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5. 05 - An Eye for an Eye

Beta: Manon.

Warning: Missing scene. BDSM, dirty language. Rape. Sex, and the whole circumstances that followed. Including torture, suicide, thought of death.
In these chapter there is a lot of torture, if you can't bear this, just LEAVE.
If you are: It is your own risk/responsibility. You've been WARNED!

Disclaimer: I do not own J R R TOLKIEN's character including horses. Only the horses' names.

Author notes: This is my first attempt in this fic, so be kind.


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I've put my trust in you
Pushed as far as I can go
And for all this
There's only one thing you should know

"In The End" - Linking Park
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Chapter Five: An Eye for an Eye

Éowyn woke up in the middle of the night when she heard the screams. At first she thought it was a dream and that the screams were a part of her dream, but the screams continued.

She looked at her husband and Aragorn and saw they were still asleep. Getting up from the bed, she dressed quickly before leaving the room, closing the door after her quietly. Taking a candle from one of the sconces, she made her way down the corridor, trying to find the source of the screams. She put her ear to each door she passed, but not hearing anything behind them. In the end there was only one door left, and she heard the screams very clearly now. She recognised the voice – it was Arwen's. Éowyn tried to open the door, but it was locked, and she became more concerned about her lady.

"My Lady?" she yelled.

"Someone… Please help me…" Arwen screamed.

Éowyn pounded her fist against the door. "My Lady!" The next words she heard chilled her.

"Legolas, please stop hurting me! I thought that you were a friend of mine – please, stop!"

"My Lady, is there something wrong?" Éowyn yelled.

She heard another moan before Arwen was heard to scream again: "Legolas, get OFF me! Someone please help me…"

Éowyn could no longer bear it; dropping the candle, she raced back down the dark corridor towards the bedroom where Faramir and Aragorn lay sleeping. She stumbled briefly in the darkness, hurting her foot, but she ignored the pain – not when someone was hurting her lady.

Opening the door, she stormed across to the bed and roughly grabbed her husband by the shoulder to try and wake him. "Faramir, my Lord – please, wake up!" The steward stirred and opened his eyes.

"What is it?" he asked, still half-asleep.

Éowyn was gasping for breath, and tears threatened. "Please – it is the Lady Arwen. I think she is being raped…"

"What?" Faramir was wide awake now. He looked at the King who was still asleep. "My Lord! Wake up, quickly!" he yelled.

"What is it?" Elessar said, annoyed at being woken up so rudely.

"My Lord, forgive up for waking you. Your wife, my Lord, she's being raped by Legolas," Éowyn said.

"No, I can not believe that…it's impossible. Legolas could never do such a thing to my wife. He is a friend," the King said, stunned by her words.

"I heard her myself, my Lord. She screamed for help, but the door was locked."

"Take me to her!" Aragorn ordered.

With her husband holding a candle to guide them, Éowyn led them to the room at the end of the corridor.

Aragorn tried the door; it opened as soon as he turned the handle. He looked at Éowyn briefly, remembering her saying that the door was locked. She looked at him in shock.

Walking into the room, they saw Arwen. She was naked, and they could see the bruises on her body. Her eyes were closed.

"No…" Aragorn cried. He didn't want to lose his wife.

He came closer to his love. "Please, my love, open your eyes," he begged. "Tell me what happened." On hearing her husband's voice, Arwen opened her eyes.

She whispered, her voice raw after all the screaming: "Legolas. Get off me…"

Aragorn could not bear it, and the wrath filled his heart. There was only one target in his mind: Legolas should suffer the way Arwen suffered.

"Éowyn stayed with her, do not let her close her eyes, or she will be lost. Faramir, you are coming with me," Aragorn ordered. With one last look at his wife, he stormily left the room.

As they left the room he gave orders to Faramir: "Faramir! Find Damrod, Glorfindel and Ulrad. Bring rope and chains with you. In the meantime, I will find him…" The steward went to do the King's bidding, while Aragorn went on his search for Legolas.

Outside the palace…in the middle of the night…

Legolas left Eofor in the stable and walked towards the gardens, breathing in the cool night air.

Taking a deep breath, he let it out slowly. He sighed. Looking up, he saw the star of Eärendil shining brightly. He smiled, but the smile faded when he saw a cloud covering the star. Legolas could sense that someone was behind him, and he shivered.

"Why were you smiling?" Aragorn asked him.

Puzzled by the anger he could hear in Aragorn's voice, Legolas said: "I was smiling because…" He could not continue as he was cut off.

"My wife was raped!" Aragorn yelled at him.

Legolas was shocked. He could not believe that someone would rape Arwen. "By whom?" he asked.

"You. Of all the people I know, you had to do that," Aragorn said angrily and walked closer to Legolas who was stunned by his words.

"But…" Legolas tried to explain.

"I do not want to hear you. I am going to make sure that you will pay," Aragorn said, then added: "If she dies, you will die."

They heard a cough; when Aragorn turned around he saw Damrod, Glorfindel and Ulrad with chains and rope.

"You came just in time. Now help me," Aragorn said and took the rope and walked towards Legolas.

"Remove his clothes, and tie his hands and legs to the trees!" Aragorn ordered, giving them back the rope.

"No…" Legolas yelled, and cried for help.

Cutting the rope in two, they used one piece to tie Legolas' hands, tying it high enough on the trunk so that his arms were above his head. The second piece of rope they tied around one ankle before bringing the rope around the base of the tree and tying the other ankle, so that Legolas' legs were spread

"My Lord?" Aragorn turned to the voice and saw it was Eofor. "Yes Eofor?" he asked.

"What are you doing to him?" asked Eofor. He saw the Prince tied to the tree, and was very worried.

"Making him pay," Aragorn said, and smiled.

"For what, my Lord? I do not understand" said Eofor.

"For raping my wife," Aragorn said, and made his way over to the tied prince. He could not see Glorfindel smiling.

"But… my Lord… he was…" Eofor tried to say, but Faramir stopped him before he could say any more.

"I recommend you leave," Faramir said and grabbed the chains, before adding: "Unless you want to pay too."

"I still think you wrong," Eofor said. He saw their angry faces. "I am leaving," he said and went back to the stables.

"Now, I will begin," Aragorn said and removed his clothes. Taking a small knife, he began to cut deeply into Legolas' back, and heard Legolas cry in pain.

"No, Aragorn. It was not me…" he tried to say through his pain.

"I do not want to hear you anymore," Aragorn yelled.

Blood was running down Legolas' back, while Legolas still cried from the pain.

"Glorfindel!" Aragorn said.

"Yes, my Lord?" Glorfindel asked.

"Take him – rape him as he raped my wife," Aragorn ordered. Leaning in towards Legolas' ears, he whispered: "Do not dare close your eyes."

Legolas began to tremble as Glorfindel hands stroked his hips, "No, please, stop…"

While Glorfindel thrust brutally into Legolas, Aragorn took the chain and threw it across Legolas' back. The elf began to shiver as he felt the cold touch of the chain.

Glorfindel felt the cold skin of Legolas' hips as he came closer. Glorfindel was moving his cock hard inside Legolas, and started moving harder and faster inside him. He could feel the other's fears.

"My Lord?" Glorfindel asked.

"Yes?" Aragorn asked as he moved the chain over and over Legolas' body.

"May I take the chain?" Glorfindel asked.

Aragorn only nodded and gave him the chain, wondering what he will do with it.

Taking the chain, Glorfindel reached around Legolas and wrapped the chain around Legolas' cock, holding on to the end of it. He enjoyed the sound of Legolas' pain.

"You are very cruel, my Lord," Aragorn said.

"I do what my king asks," Glorfindel said, smiling.

"You do it very good," Aragorn said. Then he turned towards one of the guards. "Damrod!" he called.

"Yes, my lord?" Damrod asked.

"Prepare the dungeon for him," Aragorn ordered.

"Yes my lord," Damrod said and left.

"Ulrad!" Aragorn called.

"Yes my Lord?" Ulrad asked.

"If the elf will close his eyes, you will do anything to keep his eyes open?" Aragorn asked as he moved closer to Glorfindel.

"Yes my Lord," Ulrad said.

"Glorfindel, I want to do to him what he did to my wife," Aragorn said.

Glorfindel moved away from Legolas. Blood was coming from the abused hole, and was on his shaft, which he cleaned away.

Aragorn ignored the blood, and decided to use the chain the same way Glorfindel had. Anger filled him; he remembered the sight of his wife – he could lose her because of him. When he felt tired he freed Legolas' cock from the chain.

Aragorn moved his cock closer to Legolas' hips while his strong hands beat Legolas everywhere, caused the elf a lot of pain.

'Now you are mine,' Aragorn thought and slid inside Legolas hole, taking the same pleasure as Glorfindel did of the vulnerable elf. The blood was racing through his body, his cock throbbing…

Aragorn raped him harder and faster, as he felt he failed his wife. Legolas had looked so innocent to him – or it was only his other face? Now Aragorn only saw what he thought was the evil that took his wife from him.

Aragorn wanted revenge. He took the chain and gave it to Ulrad while he raped him.

"Use it," Aragorn said. "Use it if he closed his eyes. I want him to see."

Aragorn pulled out of Legolas' body and cleaned himself; after that he dressed.

"Free the end of the rope, and throw him inside the dungeon," Aragorn said, taking the lead.

Ulrad and Glorfindel were disgusted by the elf, and carried him away from themselves.

When the door of the dungeon was opened they threw him, before Damrod tied him up again.

"Damrod," Aragorn called.

"Bring two of my bodyguards here to keep watch on him," Aragorn ordered. "I want to see his eyes open for me when the morning comes."

"Yes, my lord," Damrod said and left.

After few minutes Damrod came back with strong bodyguards, who were willing to do whatever their King ordered.

"Use whatever means to keep his eyes open," Aragorn ordered.

Aragorn watched the elf and said with a hard voice: "Your torture has just began." He left the dungeon, followed the guards Glorfindel.

End of Chapter 5.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: SivanShemesh

Status: General

Completion: Work in Progress

Era: 4th Age

Genre: Drama

Rating: Adult

Last Updated: 10/24/07

Original Post: 02/14/06

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