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Eärendil's Memories: Seen From Afar (a drabble and a half)

He stared off across the sea. With every grey wave he watched washing up against the remnants of the quays, his memories wandered back farther in time:

back to bleak-bright days witnessed from afar.

The days of Eregion in bloom: red berries bright against gleaming, dark green leaves – brilliant golden rings held in a hand blackened by fire.

That was the way Celebrimbor had come into the history of Arda as well: idolized his skills and his love, brilliant against the darkness of his forge and the shadow of the deceiver, gleaming just like his rings in the dark ashes of his forge.

That was also the way Celebrimbor was carried out of the history of Arda: bright-white in the darkening sky with his broken body wound around the standard of Sauron.

He had not been there.
But he had seen it, from afar:

bleak-bright days of Eregion in bloom.





Ghosts

The trees of this foreign country did not know him – he could not tell if that saddened him or relieved him. However, the watchfulness of the dark crows wheeling above them definitely did bother him.

During his watch Legolas moved uneasily among broken boulders that might have been buildings once. As he placed his hands on the stones, an icy draught swept through his hand. He drew back quickly. He knew it was only a ghost of an ancient time; but the pain he felt was still real and perhaps would never fade.

This was Hollin that once was Eregion.




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This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: JunoMagic

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: Multi-Age

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 01/05/06

Original Post: 10/21/05

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Alassante - 03 Apr 07 - 6:37 AM

Ch. 1: Eregion

I like this. Its subtle wording about a powerful subject. Whenever I see Celebrimbor on a character list, I have to read it because he's one of my faves and such a tragic story. I really like that you wrote about Legolas sensing his ghost. Alot like the Dead Marshes and the Paths of the Dead still had spirits lingering, I imagine some of the elves lingered in Eregion since some of them had the Noldo curse which I imagine would leave some of them lost and/or lingering there.Cry

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Shasta - 03 Apr 07 - 5:44 PM

Ch. 1: Eregion

Understatement is the key to brilliance. I think you've got it.

 I really like the way you've used this phrase: "This was Hollin that once was Eregion." It's very powerful...I might be wrong, but is this direct from the book?

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LaAcadian - 04 Apr 07 - 6:18 AM

Ch. 1: Eregion

I loved the imagery. Your description slid the reader neatly into your world.

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