Divine Intervention: 1. Varda

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1. Varda

Varda looks out from shining Taniquetil.

She smiles, pleased, and
a galaxy flares to life.


The sound of Her voice is carried
through vast skies,
sliding between the stars,
the earth;
breathing through every wind.

But what is this?

She leans closer, looking.

Varda Elentari by Maija Pietkainen 

Ragged ships, sails torn, bobbing tiredly in the great north bay,
and the south bay as well!
Exhausted travelers spill across the beaches in waves.

Two tired and careworn men, whispering beside a fire:

"We must search for them."

"No, we do not know this land."

She-of-many-names frowns, displeased.
(The galaxy trembles.)

Varda likes her universe ordered.

"These men, these
youngest-children-of-the-One, these
They mar the perfection of Today.

That will never do."

Leaning closer-closer-closer,
descending silent through the skies,
alighting on ghostlike tiptoe next to the ragged pair.

The eldest one starts, wide-eyed, speechless.


She smiles, steps closer,
lays a hand across Eldest's cheek, whispers in his ear:
"Go north, and you will find what you seek."

Later, as She examines a divine fingernail,
watching absently as Eldest rises the last hill,
and joyfully reunites with
his tall father, wide-smiling mother,
family, friends,
and the rest of his people…

She thinks, There.


Suggested Music: Aldebaran from the album The Celts by Enya.

Picture is Varda Elentári by Maija Pietikäinen. 

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Meril

Status: General

Completion: Work in Progress

Era: Multi-Age

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 01/19/09

Original Post: 08/28/05

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Divine Intervention

Gandalfs apprentice - 26 Mar 07 - 6:04 AM

Ch. 1: Varda

A delight to read and see! I'll hunt up the suggested music and read it again....a refreshing approach, and more than a little Homeric indeed. I'm glad to see that this is a Work in Progress. Keep it coming.

Divine Intervention

Meril - 26 Mar 07 - 6:25 AM

Ch. 1: Varda

Thanks, GA! The Varda double drabble was written some time ago (about two years, I think), but I always intended the story to be a series.   The bunny attacked me again yesterday, and Part 2 is written and more is coming.  :) 


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