Laer Cú Beleg: 1. Laer Cú Beleg

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1. Laer Cú Beleg


Alas! Great Bow! That once in woods and fields
was terror of the orcs, and steadfast, strong;
against the armies dark a bitter shield
that in his life could ne'er commit a wrong.
But lost he is, and lost I'll ever be,
for he is gone now, never more to trod
this barren earth. And I shall never see
his faithful face, but bend beneath Doom's rod.
And Belthronding, his faithful bow of yew,
That ne'er was wielded by a mightier hand,
that noble deeds would never cease to do:
in him was all the greatness of that land.
O Beleg! Beleg! Wilt thou not return?
The love thou gave me I have never earned.


In you was all the good in me. You knew
all things about me, and your faithful heart
asked never for return; and always true,
even in death, as we are rent apart.

Forgive me now, my brother! Please forgive
the one who never did deserve your love.
My own life I would give you now to live,
if only I could. Naught that rules above
could make exchange of one life for anoth'r.
Thou dwellest now in Mandos' shadowed halls,
Where I would come for thee, my dearest broth'r.
But I dwell now enchained, as one of thralls.

O Beleg! Beleg! Brother of my heart!
What life is left in me, when we're apart?


'Neath Doriath's boughs we dwelt in all my years
of childhood and of growing as a boy.
He was my hero, through my grief and tears
I wanted to be like him. He brought joy
to me in years of sorrow. I saw him
as idol, friend, and captain, and his face
beheld I with delight, a light in grim
sad days, when darkness was my dwelling place.
The greatest woodsman in all Middle-earth,
the truest friend of any that has lived,
the kindest spirit of the dark sea's berth,
most gen'rous heart that any one could give.

O Beleg! Now my greatest friend hath fled,
I walk this dark earth as one of the dead.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Nerdanel

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 1st Age

Genre: Poetry

Rating: General

Last Updated: 08/21/05

Original Post: 07/23/05

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