Narwen's Drabbles: 16. They Would Pay

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16. They Would Pay

Words: Limit, exhaled, passion, water, sound

He hated them with a passion. There was no limit to their cruelty.


He would never forget what they had done to Naneth. He was there with Elrohir when they rescued her. She did not make a single sound on the way home. She was broken.

He remembered it all too well.

He remembered feeding her water, drop by drop, when she would not eat.

He remembered listening to the sound of her breathing for hours on end, watching her inhale, exhale, always hoping it would not be for the last time.

He remembered the pain…

They would pay.

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This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Narwen Almiriel

Status: General

Completion: Ongoing Serial

Era: Multi-Age

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 06/12/05

Original Post: 05/17/05

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