Sins of the Fathers: 7. Wrath: The Sin of Iluvatar

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7. Wrath: The Sin of Iluvatar

What was wrought by music would be unmade for their sins. Such was his fury.

Mountains were crushed by a mighty hand; for their greed.

Green lands drowned in the rushing of the sea; for their envy.

Tall cities of stone thrown down; for their lust for the ever-life.

Fair Numenore, Land of Gift, was swallowed in fire and storm; for their pride.

Melodies rent asunder.

When his wrath was passed and his blue coat stained red with the blood of his children, the Father stopped, and knelt upon the reaching darkness, and wept for the world that was broken.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: SheBit

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: Multi-Age

Genre: Poetry

Rating: General

Last Updated: 06/01/05

Original Post: 05/12/05

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