Longings of the Eruhini, The: 1. The Longings of the Eruhini

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1. The Longings of the Eruhini

    1. My life is as the meadow’s bloom:
    2. A brief span in the cycle of the whole,

      Bursting forth in newness, rapidly to grow,

      Rising in the warmth to grasp sustaining light,

      Casting forth my seeds – then too soon the frost.

      Never winter to endure or world’s rebirth to see –

      Other shoots must sprout to replace my blighted stalk.


      Your life is as the forest oak:

      A slender, hardy trunk slowly climbing upward,

      Higher every season, steadily increasing in girth.

      Generations of flowers rise and fade beneath you,

      Snows and springs innumerable you will endure,

      Towering over the land, drawing strength from the soil!


      I envy you your roots.


    3. My life is as the leaping deer:

In form a lissome sculpture cast of flesh,

Each limb a study in animate perfection,

My every footfall is an unconscious dance.

But bounding heavenward, scant moment suspended

I do hang aloft, and then must touch again the ground.

Eternally graceful, I tread forever tethered to the earth.


Your life is as the fledging bird:

Fragile body scantly clothed in ugly tufts of down

Held fluffed against the cold, ungainly, weak,

Restless with insatiable hunger, growing, yearning –

So soon to be transfigured to resplendent feathered form,

Free at last to cast yourself with joy into the sky!


I envy you your wings.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Ithilwen

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: Other

Genre: Poetry

Rating: General

Last Updated: 04/14/03

Original Post: 09/19/02

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