Adraefan: 26. Chorus VI (Coronation)

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26. Chorus VI (Coronation)


Breathe the eternal sigh, Aragorn,
you are our King.

Flocking birds burning away into the bright sun
sun sun sunlight splayed
all through the Citadel, joyous
and crowds, thronging crowds of Minas Tirith
cheering cheering cheering silent…

But you do not hear them, Aragorn,
do you?
As the heavy crown, tall, wing-tipped
glowing intense, burdened
is placed on your head
your head
the crown
pressing against your temples and brow
whispering to you with promises to weigh
to weigh you down with a kingdom…

And so Mithrandir blesses,
and Frodo bows,
and all bow now, all bow
bowing to you, Aragorn,
as you straighten, steely-eyed
looking out over the waves
of hair glowing in the fickle sun.

Look right, Aragorn:
You see Boromir, kneeling, smiling rare,
Eru, scarred and gaunt and red-eyed…
You see Faramir, kneeling, smiling broad,
Eru, pale and weary and…

Thoughts: I have inherited a wounded kingdom.

Look left, Aragorn:
You see Mithrandir, bowing, lips quirked,
A wizard’s counsel will be needed…
You see the hobbits: one, two, three, four,
Pallidistant Frodo, Loyalstout Sam,
Slywise Merry, Innocent Pippin…
And you see Gimli and Legolas, too
and Éomer and Éowyn and Imrahil
and and and…

The pale crisp sky over what-was-Mordor.

And the crown, the crown
living, breathing, buzzing
so that your royal blood quickens
and your ancient heart races
and suddenly you know it all
yes, yes
you understand now…

All the Kings of Old,
all the West,
all the glory, silent.

The chant, almost mournful,
everyone’s breath is stilled.

“Et Eärello Endorenna utúlien…
Sinome maruvan ar Hildinyar tenn' Ambar-metta…”

And this moment is locked away in time, forever sealed.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Aeneid

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - Ring War

Genre: General

Rating: Adult

Last Updated: 10/20/05

Original Post: 08/10/04

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