Prologue-A birthday Surprise: 1. Prologue - A Birthday Surprise

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1. Prologue - A Birthday Surprise

The sky was still dark, just as it had been the last dozen times he had checked. Why does the sun stay hidden so long on those days when something special was happening? You see, it was his birthday, or would be when the sky began to grow bright, and he was anxious for it to begin. He would be getting something special this day, he knew that for certain. Not by any hints laid by family; they were as grouchy and closed mouthed towards him as always. No, he was certain that this birthday would be beyond any other because the voice had told him so.

It had piped up three days ago, while he was down by the river fetching water for cooking. When it first spoke to him, he thought one of his family had followed him and was calling from behind a tree just to watch and laugh. So, he ignored it. The whisper came again, out across the water and, even though he had no desire to give his watching relatives anymore reason to tease him; he paused in his task and listened.

The voice was soft, almost inaudible, yet compelling in its strength. He listened as the voice foretold of a magnificent present, one without equal, a present just for him. Without knowing, he dropped the buckets not yet full of his mother's cooking water and waded into the river. And all the time that voice beckoned to him. He was nearly waist deep when he was struck by a rock that bounced off his head and into the water, splashing him, blurring his eyes.

"Hey, stupid," someone called from the shore, "You left the buckets back here." They were lifted up with beefy hands. "What, you forgot how to use one of these?" They were laughing at him now, obnoxiously, as the buckets were plunged into the river with no care or finesse. "This will give us a good laugh." The intruder traipsed back up the hill towards home, the buckets now full.

The voice was forgotten as he scrambled back to the shore. He was horrified by what he had done; he had been caught while dreaming, and he had not done as his mother had asked. It would be a dismal evening, for sure. Dejectedly, he stood on the shore, water dripping into his eyes heedlessly now.. He couldn't even remember why he had gone into the water in the first place. Feeling as stupid as everyone said he was, he began the trek up the hill, sopping wet, and without his buckets.

He heard it again, just then, the voice, slithering into his thoughts, inviting him, commanding him to listen. It spoke of surprises, birthday presents, getting even. Halted, he looked back out across the river. All was peaceful again, only a fish jumping for a meal, disturbed the surface. Yet, underneath, he could feel something pulling on him, urging him back to the water.

"Come on, Stupid. You're going to be late for supper."

The mention of supper broke the bond, and he returned, almost reluctantly, to the hill. The bigger of the two buckets was thrust into his hands and, as he walked back, more water splashed out and on to his pants, then stayed in. He wasn't paying much attention, though. His thoughts were back at the river, back with the voice and its promise of presents. Inwardly, he smiled. All his past birthdays had been less than enjoyable, but this one would be different. This birthday Smeagol would be getting the birthday surprise he deserved.

Starting back to wakefulness, he realized he had been having one of those dreams, the kind where you feel like you're falling and you can't catch yourself, right before you hit bottom, you wake up with a jump. Those dreams came quite often to Smeagol, but this one had been different. Instead of the usual smoke and mist, he had been falling into a bright red and burning yellow, almost as if he had been falling in the sun.

The Sun!

Jerking his head to the right, Smeagol saw the barest hint of golden touch against the pre-dawn's blackness. The sunrise. And he had nearly missed it by sleeping. He jumped out of bed fully clothed, (he had dressed the night before just to save time), and ran to the cook fire, for he knew his mother would be there beginning the day's first meal. No one else was up yet, so he would have his mother all to himself. He stole up behind her taking great pains not to rustle the grasses strewn on the floor. She was kneeling over the fire, cracking eggs into a pot of boiling water. Bread, freshly made, was at the side cooling in the crisp morning air. The smell made Smeagol's mouth water. He had been too excited about his birthday surprise to eat much last night and now he was ravenous. Slowly he moved his arm towards the bread, a move honed over years of sneaking food behind his mother's back. His fingertips had just brushed his goal when a hand reached over and smacked his away.

"Don't touch that!" she scolded. She never missed a beat, just kept right on with her preparations. "And tell me, my Smeagol, why are we ups so early?"

As if she didn't know. Smeagol sat on the floor by the fire and watched as she added those special spices to the pot. "Maybe because it's a special day," he hinted.

"A special day? What special day?" she asked with mock ignorance. She knew very well what day it was. Not only had she bore him, but he hadn't let anyone forget that his birthday would be today. "I know, it’s special because it’s wash day. You always likes to tote the clean wash to the line."

Smeagol made a face. He most certainly did not enjoying hanging out that mound of wet clothes and such. Something always happened when he did. He would either get tangled in that mass, wound up with soaking cloth plastering his face blocking out the light and air, or drop the clean things into the dirt below. Or, if by some miracle, he did accomplish his task and all the clean laundry made it to the line safely, his cousins would play target pratice with mud globs against his handiwork, forcing him to start the labourious chore from the beginning.

He did enjoy, however, taking the dry things down. Sitting there as the lines filled with billows of white, he could almost see the sails of those ships his uncle had talked about when he had had a little too much of the spirits. He had followed the river down, his uncle did, when he was young, followed it all the way down to the end. And that was where he had seen those ships with their white sails full of the wind. Smeagol's mother always thought the old man was cracked, (he was her mate's brother, after all), and would discourage her son in listening to his nonsense. But, Smeagol would listen and devour each tale that spoke of the sea, ships and the far reaching wind. "No, it's not wash day!"

"Then it must be the day when I cleans the floors. Out with the old, in with the new."

He knew that his mother was toying with him, and had this been an ordinary day, he would have played along. But, this was his birthday. The day that the voice told him about and he was anxious to receive his special present. "No, no! Not cleaning, not wash, not stables, not anything!" he said in an angrier tone than he usually used when speaking to his mother, "This is a special day because of me, my special day. And I wants it!"

She just stared. Usually willing to forgive him and his normally odd behavior, this outburst found her tolerance growing short. Smeagol had grown irritable lately, shouting back, refusing her requests. Like that incident at the river three days ago. She was willing to overlook quite a lot from her son, but his demanding tone towards her was not one of them. "You listen here, son, I am the one that bore you, who cooks and cleans for you and I'll not be talked to like that. Just because it’s your..."

"Happy Birthday, Smeagol!" a bright, cheery voice called from the outside.

Smeagol's whole demeanor changed. "Deagol!" he shouted back as he ran to greet his cousin. He loved Deagol better than anyone else in his family, except his mother, of course. Of all his relatives, Deagol was the only one who did not taunt him, or tease him or throw clumps of dung so hard that they would cling to his hair and have to be cut out. Deagol always treated him like a brother. Grabbing him in a big hug, Smeagol lifted his cousin off the ground, swinging him in the air.

"Put me down, you crazy," Deagol sputtered out. The arms held him tight, and he was fighting to breath.

Smeagol deposited him on the ground, then proceeded to rummage through his pockets. "Where is it? I wants it," he whispered as he searched. His mother did not have it, so it must be with Deagol; the voice had promised.

Pushing those grasping hands away, Deagol said, "Stop it! You'll get your surprise when we're fishing."

There, it was said. The voice had been right! "Let's go, let's go!" Smeagol repeated as he pulled his cousin towards the river, "Now, let's go now!"

"We're going fishing," Deagol said to his sister's sister as he was dragged off to the river.

She stood in the doorway watching her son run frantically back and forth like the idiot everyone claimed him to be. This fishing with his cousin, she hoped it would be the end of it, all his talk about surprises and presents would end and he would return to being her sweet, but slightly addled brained, son. "Mind you, Smeagol," she called after the duo, "Don't you falls in now!"

Smeagol reached the shore in record time. He paced waiting impatiently for his cousin. The tiny boat sat just out of the water, packed with poles and a small bucket of wriggling dirt. He wondered if his present was in there. Finally, Deagol arrived, sauntering in his own sweet time. "Hurry, Deagol, hurry," he called, hard pressed to wait anymore.

"You're coming out of your skin, Smeagol," his cousin teased as he pushed the small boat into the water. He looked at Smeagol fidgeting on the shore, eyes darting everywhere. He had never seen Smeagol like this before. He had been excited, that was for sure, but in an innocent sort of way. Nothing like the almost animal thing he saw now.

Without a word, Smeagol jumped into the boat with Deagol behind. They rowed out into the middle of the river to a spot where the current was swift, but deep.

"I feel like this is going to be my day, Smeagol," Deagol said with a broad smile, “I can hear the big one calling to me.” This was his favorite occupation: to sit quietly in his boat, the sun on his neck, nature speaking in the background and a fishing pole in his hand. Plunging his hand into the bucket, he pulled out a glob of moist dirt. "Surprise! Pick one, Smeagol."

He just stared. This is it? Worms? Smeagol shoved the hand away. "I wants it. My real surprise."

Deagol's smile slipped a little. "We have all day, cousin. I'm doing a little fishing first." Choosing a big, juicy one, he dropped the rest back in the bucket. Skewering the worm with relish, Deagol dropped his line into the calm water, and sat back ready to wait.

Smeagol strained to hear that voice again, he needed it tickling at the edges of his mind. He would hold it to the promise. He looked at his cousin, lazing in the sun, his head nodding in sleep. An anger began to brew in his guts. Where was it? Smeagol was suddenly taken with the idea that this was all a game, a trick that Deagol had worked out to make him squirm. Just like those worms at his feet. Well, if he had to fish to order to get his surprise, then that's what he would do. Whatever it took to get his present.

With the hook in one hand, the worm in the other, he poured all his concentration on putting one on the other. Usually it took 3 to 4 tries before he succeeded in baiting his. But today it only took 2. Of course] he thought as he proudly dropped his line in the water, today's my birthday, why shouldn't I be lucky?

The water gently rocked the boat, and then Deagol to sleep. Smeagol, on the other hand, was ready to jump out of his skin. His mind itched, his fingers twitched. This waiting was unbearable. Where was his surprise?

The line twitched. It did it again, and Deagol was fully awake in an instant. "Smeagol!" he cried, wrestling with his pole, "Smeagol! I've got one!"

Excitement for his beloved cousin drowned out the desire for his surprise briefly. "Pull it in! Pull it in!"

Struggling with the line, Deagol placed his feet against the side of the boat to anchor himself. First the fish was winning, then Deagol. With one final huge jerk, Deagol went over the side and was gone.

Smeagol looked out over the river. It told no clues as to Deagol and his fish. Panic began to rise. "Deagol!" But, there was no answer. Tossing his pole aside, Smeagol grabbed the one oar and began to row furiously to shore. He would go for help. He pulled the boat out of the water and had turned to run up the hill, when the voice broke into his mind with its full force. It told him not to run away from the river, to stay by the shore. The surprise was coming.

Deagol burst out of the water and clawed himself on to dry ground, coughing and sputtering. Overjoyed at his cousin's return, Smeagol ran to him, calling, "Deagol!"

But, Deagol did not answer. His gaze was transfixed by what he held in his outstretched hand. Looking over his cousin's shoulder, Smeagol first beheld perfection. Shiny bold against the mud was a ring, a simple gold ring.

This is it, the voice said clearly in his mind, this is your present.

My present, Smeagol repeated his eyes never leaving the Ring, my precious.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: RubyGamgee

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - The Stewards

Genre: Drama

Rating: General

Last Updated: 05/15/04

Original Post: 05/03/04

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