Ar-Feiniel: 1. Ar-Feiniel

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1. Ar-Feiniel

A rose of white in secret vale,
you grew in Gondolin.
The light around you touched you not.
What did you lack, O Lady pale?

You left the city's walléd might,
to tread the path you chose,
through dells of night and woodlands dark.
What did you seek, O Lady White?

You would not stay in twilit glade,
forever bound in a fading dusk.
For one who was your captor's son
you gave yourself to poisoned blade.

Your light is fled, your beauty fell,
as the fading embers die.
When the sun is veiled by night,
All things whisper: Ar-Feiniel!

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

Story Information

Author: Aramel

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 1st Age

Genre: Poetry

Rating: General

Last Updated: 06/25/04

Original Post: 04/09/04

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