Elenion Ancalima

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Nerdanel wonders whether perhaps it would have been better if Fëanáro had not listened to his father.

Written for the May 2013 Nuzgûl of the Month ("flowers") and the May 2013 Lotr Gfic Challenge (set phrase, AU).



Chapter List

Ch# Title Words Com. Updated
1 Elenion ancalima 2,276 0 08 Jun 13
Appx. Word Count 2,276 0  



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Elenion Ancalima

Himring - 09 Jun 13 - 12:25 AM

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This is a very thought-provoking AU. The ending seems very appropriate!

Elenion Ancalima

Nath - 13 Jun 13 - 8:57 PM

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Himring, glad you enjoyed it:) Fëanor's very much unfamiliar writing territory for  me, so I'm happy the ending worked.

Elenion Ancalima

Aiwendiel - 17 Jun 13 - 6:00 AM

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What a wondrous AU tale. I particularly like that you choose to tell it through the eyes of a famous Elleth who became someone very different by this shift of fate. I find myself musing on all the impacts of your story, both good and bad... so many come to mind... Very nicely done! 


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Story Information

Author: Nath

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: 1st Age

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 06/08/13

Original Post: 06/08/13

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Different roads - 9 stories - Owner: Nath
My AU stories (mostly short) gathered in one place - I could explain here that I like seeing how changing one thing can affect everything that happens after, but perhaps it's just that I like breaking things ;-)
Included because: An alternate history for Fëanor and the Silmarils


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