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A simple trip to the brook to fetch water -- what could go wrong?  Written for the birthday of my stalwart beta-reader, Ignoble Bard.  Original characters. Horror rated PG-13.



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Ch# Title Words Com. Updated
1 Haru 1,670 2 31 Oct 11
Appx. Word Count 1,670 2  



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maeglin - 02 Nov 11 - 7:24 PM

General Comment

Great stuff, Jael!  Love your theme of good Houseless doing good.

And poor Helegui!  Such a lively character in your work, but no redeeming qualities at all (besides teaching semi-underhanded sword-tricks and showing discretion in the face of toad-induced night-screams Tired)  I'd like to see one "good Helegui" story.

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Story Information

Author: Jael

Status: General

Completion: Complete

Era: Akallabêth/Last Alliance

Genre: Other

Rating: General

Last Updated: 10/31/11

Original Post: 10/31/11

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