After Sirion

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Story Summary

After the Third Kinslaying, two pairs of brothers struggle to repair their broken families.


Chapter List

Ch# Title Words Com. Updated
1 I 1,934 1 07 Nov 09
2 II 1,822 0 07 Nov 09
3 III 3,024 0 07 Nov 09
4 IV 2,652 1 07 Nov 09
Appx. Word Count 9,432 2  



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After Sirion

Lissa - 29 Jul 08 - 11:12 AM

General Comment

Great story!  I'm glad you disregarded that cave; this works beautifully.

Very plausible reactions, both from the twins and their captors:

Maedhros and Maglor must have wanted to do everything they could to protect these innocents, remembering how they failed Elúred and Elúrin. At the same time, they must have been in shock from losing the last of their own brothers.

And since both Elrond and Elros grew up to be the admirable persons we know they became, then the last Fëanorians must have done a good job of raising them.

Well done!

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Author: toastedcheese

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 1st Age

Genre: Drama

Rating: General

Last Updated: 11/14/09

Original Post: 07/27/08

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