Rock and Hawk

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Fell things prey on the Dunedain and Dwarves of the Ered Luin. What can one wise woman do? The Dûnhebaid Cycle, Part I.

MEFA 2007: Third Place in Races: Cross-Cultural: General.

 

 

Chapter List

Ch# Title Words Com. Updated
1 Rowan and May 6,015 1 05 Jan 11
2 Blood on the Heather 4,545 1 05 Jan 11
3 Hammer and Tongs 4,596 2 05 Jan 11
4 Axes Unsheathed 5,016 1 05 Jan 11
5 Earth and Water 6,301 1 05 Jan 11
6 Reap What You Sow 4,218 4 05 Jan 11
7 Spears in the Sunset 5,258 1 05 Jan 11
8 Storm-Driven 5,179 0 05 Jan 11
9 Measure for Measure 6,390 3 05 Jan 11
10 Yuletide 6,135 1 05 Jan 11
11 A Final Word from the Author 976 4 05 Jan 11
12 When, Where, and Who 2,201 0 05 Jan 11
Appx. Word Count 56,830 19  
 

 

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Gwynnyd - 22 Sep 06 - 11:40 PM

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Lovely!  You have a very nice turn of phrase in many places. 

I'm curious about the booted/bare footprints and looking forward to the next chapter! 

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Adaneth - 25 Nov 06 - 11:00 AM

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Thank you, Gilnaur--what more can a story-teller want than for someone to ask for more?Grin

Who was it who said "I love to lose myself in other men's minds"?  I enjoy the challenge of trying to see the world as others do, to get that different and therefore fresh perspective on things.  Frankly, I didn't expect to have this much success with Dwarves.  I'll have to write an ethnography for the Research Articles section when I'm done.

At this point, barring interventions by the Muse, there should be one more chapter of "Rock and Hawk."  There is, however, a sequel planned and in rough outline (a vivid little scene from about three-quarters of the way through is already lodged in my head).  The two together would be too long for a novel, but since I have been intentionally writing "spare"--focusing on character and plot, and trying to avoid slatherings of description, lyrical or otherwise--it wouldn't be hard to flesh them out to novel-length.

Cheers--

Adaneth

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Imhiriel - 20 May 07 - 4:16 PM

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As the story I had the pleasure of reviewing recently, I think "Rock and Hawk" is a marvellous work. There is so much evident work and detail and thought and care poured into the story, and it makes one seamless, natural whole.

I really love the fact that you explore in great detail the misunderstandings that exist between races, or between genders, or even just between different personalities; that you don't just pass over it as given. The so differing views of Dwarves on the standing of women and of social classes was especially fascinating: it was as if Men represented the historical facts of our own time, whereas Dwarves brought in the alternate, fantastic element.

The landscape is described beautifully, and you're right, the parallels with the wilds of Scotland are quite fitting, for your setting in place, and perhaps even in time (and I like your vocabulary lists - very educational; even if I knew some words, it was nice to have succinct definitions for all of them Wink).

May I ask you to compose a character list for this story, as well? When the refugees arrived, I fear I began to lose track of the cast, especially as there far too many people beginning with "H" Grin.

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Adaneth - 22 May 07 - 11:17 AM

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The so differing views of Dwarves on the standing of women and of social classes was especially fascinating: it was as if Men represented the historical facts of our own time, whereas Dwarves brought in the alternate, fantastic element.

Well, Imhiriel, the Men are meant to closely follow the early medieval cultures that Tolkien used as models; and the Dwarves, with one very significant exception (to be explored in the third story in the cycle, which will start appearing shortly), to have attitudes more in line with current Western cultures.

Of course, some people would say that's pretty fantastic!  Wink

I'm glad you found the notes helpful, and I will certainly consider your request for a character list for this story as well.

Cheers--

Adaneth

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Mantida - 07 Jun 07 - 7:54 AM

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I am extremely pleased to have found this novel. You write great descriptions (and have a great eye for detail) and great dialogues. The settings and the plot is interesting, too. And, above all, you write about Dwarves! Dwarves! So few authors write about them, and I find them the most fascinating of Tolkien's creations.

You have given us a very detailed (and very believable) picture of everyday Men's life. In later parts, I hope for equally compelling presentation of Veylin's dwelling and family (I am particularly curious about his sister.). You make good use of what little Tolkien told us about Dwarves (I admit to being somewhat Dwarves-obsessive, so I consider myself a good judge).

As far as the people go, Saelon is a very vivid personality, and the Men's portraits are really good. Veylin and the Dwarves come, by comparison, paler now (apart from Rekk), but this will probably change later on. Such a nice perspective of lot of good reading still to come!

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Adaneth - 07 Jun 07 - 10:34 AM

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Dear Mantida,

Dwarves! So few authors write about them, and I find them the most fascinating of Tolkien's creations.

<takes off hood and bows>  At your service!  It's a pleasure to find another connoisseur of the Khazâd.

Dwarves are, as you know, secretive fellows, so it takes a little time to, hm, winkle them out of their shells.  Wink  You will find your first glimpse of Veylin's home in the second story in the cycle, Fair Folk and Foul . . . and will meet more of the family in the currently ongoing tale, "Of Like Passion."

I would be interested in your opinion of my attempt at canon-based dwarf-women.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Adaneth

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Dwimordene - 10 Jul 07 - 8:57 PM

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Hello Adaneth,

I have just finished reading this story - very well done! I love the lush description of the landscape and of the environment, which set the mood so very well.

I also quite enjoyed the slow unfolding of human and dwarven worlds, their unexpected collision, and the tentative, difficult path towards something like friendship between Saelon and Veylin. They each have such strong voices, and their lives follow quite different arcs, determined by different cultures and gender, yet they are a match for each other. Not complements, but the right sort of resistance to each other, in a way, that clears a space for friendship and even the joking possibility of more (even if Veylin splutters to think of it and fears insult to Saelon's honor even to hear it in jest).

I look forward to the next part of the saga, and hopefully won't have to wait too long before I'm able to take it up.

Thanks for a lovely, compelling read!

Dwim

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Adaneth - 27 Jul 07 - 5:56 AM

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Apologies for such a belated reply to your praise of Rock and Hawk, Dwim: the message arrived an hour after I headed off into the Wild!  Smile

Since you are one of the authors I have been reading since I first started dropping in on HASA several years ago, it is a pleasure to be able to return some of the enjoyment your work has given me.  "Cuts Gone Wrong" is only the most recent example, and The Gift-giving of Celeborn is a must for all Dwarf-friends.

The next story in the Dûnhebaid cycle, Fair Folk and Foul, will be waiting here until you can find time for it, and more beyond that.

Cheers--

Adaneth

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Beleth - 09 Jul 08 - 12:45 AM

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This was a very nice story! Saelon is such a realistic heroine. She has good qualities and bad qualities. I wonder what's going to happen to her people now. They surely won't stay in the caves forever? Thanks so much for writing!

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Adaneth - 10 Jul 08 - 11:14 AM

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Thank you for the comments, Alquawende.

I wonder what's going to happen to her people now. They surely won't stay in the caves forever?

Keep reading and find out!  Wink

Cheers--

Adaneth

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Adonnen Estenniel - 22 Mar 11 - 10:42 PM

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This was a delightful piece. You addressed racial and cultural barriers delicately and effectively, and managed at the same time to weave an entertaining plot throughout. 

I enjoyed your portrayal of the characters, as they were certainly dimensional and unique to themselves, yet still maintained the prevalent features of their respective races. The tension between the two groups was well-played; it was, to be quite honest, my favourite part of your characterization. Writing about characters who respect each other but do not necessarily like each other is a difficult thing, and I think you walked that fine line very well.

Thank you for this read.

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Adaneth - 24 Mar 11 - 5:27 AM

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The tension between the two groups was well-played; it was, to be quite honest, my favourite part of your characterization.

You will not be surprised, then, to learn that I love the counterpoint of Baroque music.  Smile

Thank you for your appreciation.  I find it difficult to read stories where all of the principal characters love each other all the time--as Tolstoy pointed out, happy families are all alike, and that rarely makes for interesting fiction.  And Dwarves are notoriously cranky and cross-grained.

But some of us like them anyway.  Even if we sometimes want to take the flat of an axe to them.  Wink

Cheers-

Adaneth

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Orofyn - 21 Jun 11 - 7:08 AM

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Greetings Lady! I am enjoying reading the story arc a 2nd time through. I have not found an answer to a my question in any previous readers post so I will ask. Where about on the Middle Earth map is Saelon's cave home?


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Story Information

Author: Adaneth

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - The Stewards

Genre: Drama

Rating: General

Last Updated: 02/26/11

Original Post: 09/22/06

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The Dûnhebaid Cycle - 5 stories - Owner: Adaneth
Dúnedain and Dwarves--and oh, yes, some Elves--on the northwest shore of Middle-Earth, not quite a century before adventures first befall Bilbo. Rampant Subcreation and Niggling in the margins. The ever-lengthening saga, in order.
Included because: Dûnhebaid I: hammering out an unlikely friendship between a Dwarf and a Dúnadaneth.

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Dúnedain of the North
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