The Call Of Duty: Legolas At Erebor

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Story Summary

We all know he had to be there, so what was he doing while Bilbo and The Professor overlooked him? Follow in the footsteps of the Elvenking's son, as we see the latter events in The Hobbit and the Battle of the Five Armies from an Elven perspective.
 

 

Chapter List

Ch# Title Words Com. Updated
1 A Mirkwood Pastorale 4,062 2 19 May 07
2 A Gentle-elf And A Scholar 2,076 2 20 Jun 07
3 Upon The Cold Hillside 2,007 1 08 May 07
4 A Soldier Of The King 4,839 1 19 May 07
5 What Marches Down The Mountain Pass? 3,206 1 19 May 07
6 All That Is Finished, Let It Fade 2,897 1 20 Jun 07
Appx. Word Count 19,087 8  
 

 

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The Call Of Duty: Legolas At Erebor

LaAcadian - 21 May 07 - 3:17 PM

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Jael,

 I thoughly enjoyed your story. Especially appreciate that you protray Thranduil as a noble king not a greedy elf and severe father. I can not imagine Thranduil did not love his son. He  had an enormously expensive mithril shirt made to protect Legolas.

Your characters are well rounded. Your use of dialogue good. Your setting well describe and easy to visualize. But most impressive was the pacing. The battle flowed well and was engaging. The conflict was good and believable. I could not stop reading and I found myself lost into the story.

Well Done! I look forward to read more of your stories.


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Story Information

Author: Jael

Status: Reviewed

Completion: Complete

Era: 3rd Age - The Stewards

Genre: General

Rating: General

Last Updated: 05/20/07

Original Post: 09/16/06

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Mirkwood Elves - 6 stories - Owner: oshun
Chosen for POV, military details, canon facts relating to Greenwood/Mirkwood Elves.
Included because: Legolas At Erebor

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