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DrummerWench - 27 Jan 07 - 12:41 PM
Very nice, Forodwaith! An interesting and slightly bittersweet take on Arwen's first days in Minas Tirith. I liked your O.C., too--shy, but friendly to the noble madwoman.
DW
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Elena Tiriel - 28 Jan 07 - 2:34 AM
Ah, I lke this, Forodwaith! The noble Minas Tirith society indeed must have felt stifling to Arwen; I so empathize with her yearning to speak with someone without having to worry about stultifying Gondorian protocol.
And your OC, Helin, is a delight... reluctant to learn from peremptory healers, but becoming fascinated when she is simply speaking with someone who respects her, knows the herblore intimately, and loves to pass it along.
- Barbara
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