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For him I cry
Rithralindë - 04 Dec 07 - 10:34 PM
I really enjoyed this one, and nearly wept m'self!
The composition and how the story continued to keep you drawn in, (sort of the hope of 'he'll stay, come'on he has to!'), and it didn't sacrifice anything for plot. The observations and narrative were lovely.
Good work, a worthy craft! :-) Hope you make more!![]()
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