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The Portrayal of Denethor in Fanfic
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21 May 05 12:00 PM
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Hello, fellow Denethor fans, this is Loremaster of Anorien. I joined HASA a few weeks and absolutely love it here. It's great to know that I'm not the only obsessive, lifeless person in the world. (Not that I'm insulting anyone.
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Anyway, I'm still suffering from awe-sickness. I mean, a lot of you have written the BEST House of Hurin fics I've ever read. It was actually due to your fics that I began liking Denethor in the first place, and I'm trying to get it through my skull that I can actually *gasp* communicate with you.
To get back to what I was blabbering about, I recently finished a Denethor/Finduilas fic, Of Denethor and Finduilas , and after finishing it, I decided that I had written an OOC Denethor.
After lamenting on and on over my perceived notion that I had written an OOC Denethor (whether I had is open to interpretation ), a question hit me.
How far can someone go in portraying Denethor's character in fanfic? How can a person know if she (or he) has written him out-of-character?
Of course, I'm not really sure if I'm the only one struggling with writing his character, but I would love to know what all of you have to say.
Namarie!
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I think Eldamir is exactly right to ask: can I logically get here from what I see in the books. (Which is why I personally think physically abusive Denethor is OOC, because I don't see that kind of violence in him until he really does go mad. Now, emotionally abusive Denethor is a whole different matter....)
I'm not a complete Denethor apologist (Raksha may disagree with me on that
): the man did some monstrous things. What interests me is how someone whom Tolkien apparently intended to be basically decent (he does mention his "pure" Numenorean descent) became such a monster. How did Denethor and Faramir, who are so very similar in many ways, end up making such different choices?
One aspect that IMHO often gets overlooked is that Denethor had two aspects to his interactions with his sons: professional as well as personal. At least some of the time when he's being tough on Faramir, it's as a commander-in-chief with a captain, rather than a father with a son. I would expect Denethor to be tough on any captain - although I also feel he drives his sons harder because he fears criticisms that he's protecting his sons while sending others' sons to die. (What you make of the "correctness" of Denethor's strategies is another matter - Tolkien, in Letters, saw Denethor as "tainted by 'politics'" and thinking only, selfishly and inappropriatel of Gondor rather than the wider needs of M-e.)
To me, part of the tragedy of Denethor is that he put "professional" before "personal" for all of Faramir's life, and realised the folly of that only when (he thought) it was too late and Faramir was dead.
Anyway, enough rambling. I'll take a look at your story over the next couple of days and give you some feedback soon.
Cheers, Liz
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I was (I hope) more trying to throw some ideas out for the mix about what Tolkien said and what that might mean, rather than take the argument one way or the other.
I agree with you that Denethor was in an incredibly difficult role for many many years, even if you don't throw the palantir into the mix, and he cared passionately about Gondor. His "nationalist" view was not necessarily completely "wrong", just as Faramir's more "internationalist" view was not necessarily completely "right".
And I always feel Faramir might well have made a terrible steward if he'd been the one in charge for the particular 35 years during which Denethor ruled, with that particular set of problems.
He'd have certainly had to become a lot more ruthless!
Denethor was definitely one of the "losers" that history can be so cruel to....
Cheers, Liz
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As for "Excellent Adventure", I wasn't thinking of a slash fic, although I agree there's great potential for that sort of thing. More of a "soldiers in the field" kind of story, I think. I have exactly zero lines written, so who knows what will happen?
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If that's long enough to join you in calling myself demented, I will be happy to admit to it.
Gwynnyd
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As for Denethor/Thorongil slash, I tend to think that wouldn't work. I don't think Thorongil particularly attracted to men. And although I'm not sure about Denethor, I tend to think he's too straight-laced to even try something like that.
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I was mostly kidding when I described Faramir that way. I've always liked cynical and tough Faramir circa TTT much better than Faramir in The Steward and the King portion of RoTK. As beautiful as Tolkien's words are, I've always found the actual Faramir-Eowyn romance a little dull. All you E/F shippers can just shoot me now.
I don't recall exactly where, but Tolkien describes Denethor as being "dauntless" (or maybe fearless?). Frankly, you'd have to be pretty undaunted and tough to do battle, even via palantir, for so long with the Enemy. I think both of Denethor's sons inherit that from him. Also, although Faramir is clearly more compassionate, it wouldn't surprise me in the least if he turned out to be just as calculating and astute a diplomat/politician as Denethor. With the exception of his compassionate nature, most of Faramir's outstanding traits are inherited from his father. So throw Denethor a bone already!
Denny might well agree, eventually, but Aragorn is going to have to be very charming and Imrahil might have to play mediator.
Exactly. I mean, Denethor will require serious persuasion (maybe even a buy-off of some sort), but it would be political suicide for him not to acknowledge Aragorn as king. A sane Denethor circa 3019 would be the consummate political animal.
On another note, I've always wondered what Denethor's personal relationship with Imrahil was like. Imrahil's quite a bit younger than Denethor, so I can't imagine that they were ever friends, although they are kinsmen and that always alters the equiation, I think. (For the same reason, I doubt Imrahil was friends with Thorongil). In fanfiction, Imrahil always seems to be very pro-Faramir and therefore anti-Denethor. In extreme cases, Imrahil resents Denethor for "killing" Finduilas. I'm not sure any of these theories are expressly supported in canon.
I'm contemplating writing something where Imrahil helps Faramir get over his father's death and the events surrounding him, by remembering a younger and less batty Denethor...
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) But I have an impression it might have been a flaw for Tolkien. Good people in LotR tend to be either "merry", or at least potentially "merry". Anybody remembers about a good LotR character who is permanently grim?