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Elena Tiriel
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23 May 04 7:33 PM
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Elanor Gamgee is listed under Elanor Gardner. This is an area of confusion, but I truly believe that only Frodo-lad, of all the Gamgee children, has the last name Gardner.
For Elanor, I don't remember why it was done that way, I suppose it really should be Elanor the Fair, shouldn't it? If you have something that clarifies what it should be, educate me!
Lyllyn
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P.S. I'm not just trying to make work for the Resource Managers... really!Coming in late - as usual.
I'm always delighted to find a fellow obsessive when it comes to accuracy, so have at it. Lyllyn and I have been talking about putting together a tutorial/article outlining guidleines for contributions to Resources, and you've made reference to several of the points I want to include.
One is that all information needs to be attributed to the source, so that if a question arises, it can be verified. The other relates to what is considered a primary source, what is a secondary source, and what sources may be questionable - Foster's is a good example (I once had a beta reader insisting that Silmarien had to have the diacritic - i.e. Silmaríen because Foster's had it that way. I said no because in The Silmarillion it doesn't have the diacritic - primary source vs secondary).
Should the Enchanted River be listed under "R" (as it is now), or "E"?
I think this is one of the problems we had talked about before about the ability to cross-reference things - right now entries can only be listed under one letter. IIRC the determining factor re: which letter to list something (or someone) would be the one people would be most likely to look under. I think this one may have been listed under R because if someone was looking for a river but couldn't remember it's name, they could look under R for river. I trust Lyllyn will correct me if I'm mistaken in this.
Another thing to include in the tutorial/article.
~Nessime
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"E" please.Oops! I missed your post, Lyllyn. I had thought I rembered this being under R for those people who were looking but couldn't remember the correct name of the river, especially since the text search will return Enchanted River for those who do know the name. If someone types in river, will they get a list of all the rivers? (I'll have to try that one out?) See all the information we need for that tutorial, Lyllyn? We should start a list for ourselves (or do you have one already?)
~Nessime
PS added - I tried typing just river into the search box and got back 130 places (not to mention the people,things and events). It's a good thing there is more than one way to find the information. At least the drop-down search limits it to Rivers and Lakes. ::whew::
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You're not late. I haven't been to bed since posting the original thread, so you're not late. ;-)
One is that all information needs to be attributed to the source, so that if a question arises, it can be verified.
Yay! Agreed! There seem to be two styles of entries. One is when people like to write things, pulling together a lot of different pieces of info, and maybe some quote(s) and citation(s) at the end.
I like to pull together a lot of quotes, but I leave them in the original form (with citations), and just try to group them so that they make sense (e.g. by adding subheadings, like "History", "Language", "Skills", etc). That's mostly because I'm too lazy to write anything myself unless it's absolutely necessary. (See The Beornings for an example.)
I've even recently (yesterday) decided to change the way I do editorial insertions for clarity:
Instead of:
[Gandalf] said "xyz" to [Thorin Oakenshield's company].
I now (when possible) try to say:
He [Gandalf] said "xyz" to them [Thorin Oakenshield's company].
That way, you get the original wording, as well as the clarification.
The other relates to what is considered a primary source, what is a secondary source, and what sources may be questionable
Yup (and Foster is particularly squirrelly in that regard ;-} ).
Speaking of primary/secondary sources, would you look at something for me and tell me if you think it's a good idea? I have The Annotated Hobbit, and a few of the footnotes give useful, high-quality info (eg etymologies). I've included some of these notes in the bios for Mirkwood, Shelob, and Orcs. If you get a chance, would you or Lyllyn take a look and let me know if you'd like me to continue including these (when I get a chance)? I have to type them in myself (the horror!), so if you don't think they're a source worth including, I'll leave them out in the future. They (the interesting footnotes, that is) range somewhere between a low primary (excerpts of JRRT's letters) to a high secondary source (credible etymologies).
I've also quoted Karen Fonstad's Atlas of Middle-earth in Place entries. I've seen errors in it, also, but the maps are incredibly helpful for visualizing and describing places. (See The High Pass of Rivendell for an example of where I quote the Atlas -- then quibble with it.) (Obsessive? moi?)
Okay, it's past 7am. I really need to stop typing Resource tidbits and questions and hie me off to bed. I really mean it this time.
- Barbara
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Not yet....Okay, I'll bite. The Concerning Pipeweed article can stay in beta of awhile longer - and Avon innocently enough has inspired a compilation of the exact titles or forms of address Tolkien used for each of the major characters in LotR - Barbara, if you read this, I would love to have your input on this at some point.
If you haven't got it already, you'll see a missive in your e-mail presently. I think an outline would be the best way to start; that will allow us to organize the information we want to include, then fill in the specifics. I'll start that as soon as I clear out the other tasks I absolutely need to take care of today.
~Nessime
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Some fellow by the name of Douglas A. Anderson. The front cover says "Winner of the Mythopoeic Society Scholarship Award"::blinks:: Duh! Of course! I should have remembered. Douglas Anderson is the one who wrote the Note on the Text that is found at the beginning of every copy of LotR that's been published since 1980-something. He's also the one who confirmed for me that it was a proofreader at Harper-Collins who mistakenly changed froward to forward. As far as I'm concerned, anything he's written is second (or is it third?) only to JRRT himself and CT. No, that's good enough for me. As long as you cite the source, feel free to add anything from The Annotated Hobbit that is pertinent. ~Nessime
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Pipeweed?Only if you want to.
I was really referencing the as yet un-posted compilation of titles and forms of address. You've no doubt seen them all in the course of your reseach for the genealogies. I won't be able to focus on it immediately, but I will gratefully accept any input you might have to offer.
~Nessime
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~Loqi
P.S. Barbara, you are one of the greatest geeks I've ever known. I salute you.
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P.S. Barbara, you are one of the greatest geeks I've ever known. I salute you.
Why, thank you, Loqi! It is an honor to be so distinguished by a fellow traveler...
- Barbara
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(Edit: ) I'm not a Resource Manager, so this is strictly my personal, unofficial opinion:I see that my fellow Resource Manger has already seconded this, so I can only third it.
Loqi, as Lyllyn said, information is good; more information - and information more widely disseminated - is even better. IMO as long as the information can be verified in a primary source (and if the source is cited that should be a simple matter), I don't see any problem with copying it to another related entry.
As Barbara said, I can't imagine anyone objecting to sharing information - isn't that what Resources is all about anyway?
~Nessime
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Elanor is listed in the Index of Return of the King under Gamgee, not Gardner. That's canonical enough for me! (I can't believe I didn't notice that before...)That's another reason why it is good to have many eyes looking at these things - no one person (no matter how much of a research geek
) is able to do it all. Thank goodness for teamwork.
This also illustrates what we were discussing before about primary sources and the order of precedence given to information gleaned from them.
For example, if information from LotR is contradicted in UT; that in LotR takes precedence (legitimate corrections to the texts excepted). On the other hand, if the information is an addition to that in LotR, it should be added along with the citation of the source.
More stuff for those tutorials - yes, Lyllyn, I'm making a list, checking it twice...
~Nessime
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BUT I believe that Silmarien (no umlaut) is the correct version. Why? Because that's how it's spelled in the Silmarillion, which is where Silmarien is introduced and her story is told. In RoTK, she only appears once, in Appendix B, The Tale of Years.
So, is that an exception to the rule that you wish to document in the tutorials? Or does documenting it just complicate matters too much? Or do we treat the precedence of the Appendices differently from the rest of LoTR?
I'm very good at that (complicating matters), by the way. *Sigh*
- Barbara
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And I just checked, of the many places Silmarien showed up in the UT, her name does not have an umlaut. That makes it two against one, even though Lotr takes precedence.
~Loqi
Agreed. I think the spelling in LoTR is an anomaly.
- Barbara
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BUT I believe that Silmarien (no umlaut) is the correct version...Aggh! I had never noticed that in the Tale of Years. Let me make a couple of inquiries and I'll get back to you. Baring a definitive answer from a more authoritative source like D. Anderson or David Bratman (I'm still waiting for my copy of his "A Corrigenda to The Lord of the Rings"), I agree with you and Loqi; this could be one of those cases where the appendix contains an error that has gone uncorrected - I checked my collector's edition of LotR (the red leather bound one) and it too has the umlaut in Silmarien's name. *sigh* But both The Silmarillion and UT spell it without. ~Nessime
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Thank you both! I'll work on it this evening (when I'm more alert)
PS - I haven't looked, but may I assume that all the other names that may be attributed to Elanor are duly noted in her bio (with appropriate citations)?
Um, do you mean like these (from my Genealogy Index spreadsheet)?
Elanor Gamgee
Elanor Fairbairn
Ellie
Elanorellë
The Fair
I'll check this evening.
- Barbara
P.S. Not to brag (okay, I'm bragging), but I just finished entries for
The Elf-path,
The Forest Gate,
Black Squirrels,
Butterflies,
Giant Bats,
Giant Moths, and
Hunting Dogs,
all from about two chapters of The Hobbit. This is supposed to be a children's book?
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P.S. Not to brag (okay, I'm bragging), but I just finished entries for The Elf-path, The Forest Gate, Black Squirrels, Butterflies, Giant Bats, Giant Moths, and Hunting Dogs, all from about two chapters of The Hobbit.Hey, a little bragging now and then isn't a bad thing.
Well done!
For those interested, we're approaching 300 entries for places, and 200 for Things!Way to go, team! *thunderous applause* ~Nessime
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BUT I believe that Silmarien (no umlaut) is the correct version...When in doubt, go to the experts.
I just got a response to my query from Carl F. Hostetter, whom I trust is authoritative enough on the subject of Tolkien's languages (and therefore, the proper spelling of names). I don't think he'll object to my quoting him here:The diaeresis (umlaut) is just an orthographic convention used by Tolkien in The Lord of the Rings to indicate to the English reader that the vowel it marks is to be pronounced, not silent or diphthongized. Tolkien often did not bother using it in other writings. So either spelling is correct.Based on this information, I would suggest that both spellings be included in her bio, with the notation that Tolkien himself used both. So Foster wasn't wrong in this case; he just didn't include all the relevant information - but we will.
~Nessime
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I just got a response to my query from Carl F. Hostetter
You don't mess around, do you?
Based on this information, I would suggest that both spellings be included in her bio, with the notation that Tolkien himself used both.
So Foster wasn't wrong in this case; he just didn't include all the relevant information - but we will.
~Nessime
You do realize that this means that someone has to go through every Dwarf's name with an accent and mention both spellings? Tolkien added the accents after The Hobbit. (Actually, I guess that only applies to the Dwarves in the Quest of Erebor...)
- Barbara
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You don't mess around, do you?Nope.
(Actually, I guess that only applies to the Dwarves in the Quest of Erebor...)IIRC those are the only ones. IMO it's only names found in The Hobbit, LotR, The Silmarillion and UT where this is an issue; alternate spellings in HoM-e don't signify (if they did I'd have to add Hasofel to Hasufel's bio
).
~Nessime
PS added - Just edited Silmarien/Silmariën's bio.
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I was just reading the bio for Silmarien (nice work on the name, Nessime!), and found an error:
The bio says:
Silmarien married Elatan, the Lord of Andúnië, in S.A 548; their son was Valandil.
But Elatan of Andúnië did not have the title Lord of Andúnië; I believe the title was bestowed first on their son, Valandil, presumably in honor of his royal bloodline.
The UT Index says:
Elatan of Andúnië Númenórean, husband of Silmarien, father of Valandil first Lord of Andúnië.
and the entry for Silmarien is similar.
- Barbara
(Edit: ) Okay, I suppose that entry can be ambiguous, but because of its location, I think the phrase "first Lord of Andúnië" describes Valandil, not Elatan of Andúnië. I should have used Silmarien's entry instead:
Silmarien Daughter of Tar-Elendil; mother of Valandil first Lord of Andúnië and ancestress of Elendil the Tall.
(Edit 2: ) I propose the following wording:
Silmarien married Elatan of Andúnië in S.A 548; their son was Valandil, the first Lord of Andúnië.
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Actually, I just thought of a question about why you added Silmarien's alternate spelling the way you did...
Is there a reason that you didn't put Silmariën in the Other Name(s) field, instead of changing the primary entry name? For example, is there a difference in the search capabilities between these two fields?
The reason I asked is that I just glanced at a list of bios, and my eye just sort of skipped over "Silmarien or Silmariën*". My brain saw the "shape" of the title, and interpreted it as the name of a research article (eg One Glorfindel or Two?), rather than a bio.
I also think that using both names in the title gives them equal value, and I would still argue that Silmarien is the, um, preferred spelling, since that is the one used exclusively in the Sil and UT, where all her background story is written.
Am I missing something?
- Barbara
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~Nessime
I've changed Elanor Gardner to Elanor Gamgee, but have run into a bit of an oddity:
The entry says Gamgee, but if you run a Resource Search (say, on "elanor"), the list says Elanor Gardner. (But if you click on the link, it's the Gamgee entry.)
Does something else internal need to change, too? Like, when you gods have to set up a new bio before we peons can enter data, do you give it a name in a different database field from the one we can edit?
I'm worried that changing the internal name might force a new ID, which means I'll have to go a change a few links to Elanor. (Stop me before I cross-link again!!)
Am I making the slightest bit of sense here?
- Barbara
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Is there a reason that you didn't put Silmariën in the Other Name(s) field...It's not really an Other Name; it's an alternate spelling, equally legitimate according to Hostetter. BTW I also prefer the spelling without the diaeresis (umlaut) for the very reasons you stated, but Hostetter's point is that, since Tolkien himself used both, both are equally valid. Otherwise we would still face the argument that LotR was published in Tolkien's lifetime and should take precedence. You are right about the fact that it looks awkward - I wonder if it would look better as Silmarien / Silmariën. The only other choice would be to specify in the Other Name text box that Silmariën is a recognized alternate spellling, and point toward the note at the end of the main text to explain it. I'm not terribly picky about which way it displays as long as it''s perfectly clear to those reading the bio that both spellings are valid. As for the search capabilities, I honestly hadn't thought about that. I don't think it makes much difference either way. I run through a couple of searches just to be sure. ~Nessime PS added - For the sake of neatness I opted for the Other Name choice, with the note that both spellings are correct.
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The entry says Gamgee, but if you run a Resource Search (say, on "elanor"), the list says Elanor Gardner. (But if you click on the link, it's the Gamgee entry.)IIRC it just takes a little time for the list to catch up with the changes - the same happened when I changed Silmarien's bio (both times
). Everything is as it should be now (I just did the search for Elanor and it gave me Elanor Gamgee).
So don't fret; all is well.
~Nessime
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a) The introductory text at the beginning (which is in flux: I might delete the history paragraph if I find the right quotes for the History section), which I wrote without attribution.
b) That I mention that not all of the spiders found in Middle-earth are the giant spiders (I did NOT say: "that we all know and love", though the temptation was great...
).
c) The fact that I organized all the quotes into themes/sections, instead of leaving them intact as they are in the books:
Physical Characteristics
History
Dwelling Places
Dark Nets (Webs)
Magical Powers
Communications
Mirkwood Spiders
d) That I used the term "magical" to describe the ability of the spiders to control Unlight, to cast holding spells, to talk, etc.? Perhaps I should say "unusual", "abnormal", "uncommon", "out of the ordinary", "not found in spiders outside Middle-earth" or something else?
e) That I included the snarky comments made by the spiders about the dwarves? (I think the quotes rather handily describe the personalities of the Mirkwood spiders...)
f) That I embellished the section headings with non-Tolkien quotes? (I could certainly do without the song and LoTR quote, but the "Oh, what a tangled web we weave, when first we practice to deceive" quote is just too PERFECT to describe those two sections... But I will -- albeit reluctantly -- remove that one also if you really think it's inappropriate...)
One other thing that may just be me - I'm curious. The links in the text are convenient, but when there many links in the text I get visually put off and it takes more effort to read. Possibly simply a color issue. What is the balance for most people in this?
It's not just you. I've noticed this and am also concerned about it; but I've chosen to err on the side of more links because I think they're so convenient. Part of the problem is that, because I'm slicing and dicing quotes and paragraphs into separate themes/sections, I sometimes end up with too many or too few (no) links to a given item mentioned in the paragraph.
What I'm trying to say is, I will go back and remove any instances of multiple links *to the same thing* within a single paragraph... anyplace where it's obvious it's the same thing. That *might* at least cut down on the number of links, I'm not sure.
Any other questions/suggestions are most welcome, as usual.
- Barbara
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Incidentally, I've been talking with Ang about your geneaologies, and we're still discussing how to present them. Aside from the actual PDF file, do you have any other thoughts?
Lyllyn
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Let me get back to you on the Genealogies when my head is clearer...
- Barbara
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Good! I'm going through all the entries that I added links to, and removing duplicates that are too close to each other. It does seem to make the links less distracting.Do you think that linking the first mention of each person, place, thing or event would suffice? Otherwise I think the links are helpful, especially if they open in a new window (IIRC you've done this, yes?). I have some further thoughts, primarily pertaining to the description. A couple of things niggled at my memory, and I've been going through the various texts to see if my recollection is correct or not. I'd like to send this in an e-mail once I collect all my thoughts and relevant data together. I had most of it but the computer decided to have a brain hemorage or something, and the data got lost when I had to restart the computer. I'm now in the process of retracing my steps (I hope). I second the appreciation of the etymology - you may be interested in a note I found in HoM-e 8 from CT about a letter from JRRT that mentions the etymology:
...on 21 May (Letters no. 70) he said:.. Do you think Shelob is a good name for a monstrous spider creature? It is of course only 'she + lob' (= spider), but written as one, it seems to be quite noisome.~Nessime
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but if a link doesn't appear in the last ~three or four linear inches of text, I forget it's there (and definitely if it's not on the same screenful of text).
This, of course, applies to long entries with multiple excerpts, like Giant Spiders. I don't tend to duplicate links very much on shorter entries, like the the Red Book, although there are a couple. That entry has a lot of links, and I think it was much improved by removing all but two of the duplicates.
Otherwise I think the links are helpful, especially if they open in a new window (IIRC you've done this, yes?).
Yes, once I learned how (from the lovely tutorial), I always open the link in a new window. (See above comment about "short attention span" -- If I follow two links I can't remember where I started or why, unless the window is still there...) I even edited my posts in this thread to open all the links in a new window... Obsessive?
I have some further thoughts, primarily pertaining to the description.
I'm anxious to hear, um, read them. Sorry about the computer glitch! My laptop is ailing, which is why I don't have my beautiful electronic texts to gather excerpts from...
I second the appreciation of the etymology - you may be interested in a note I found in HoM-e 8 from CT about a letter from JRRT that mentions the etymology:
Oooooh! Tidbits, my precious! Lovely tidbits, so juicy sweeeet... Now where would be a good place to store that one, precious? Maybe under my good friend, Shelob? Must have it, my precious.....
(I actually had seen that while doing the research, but at the time didn't think it interesting enough to copy. Now that I've finally compiled everything into a Library entry, I think it would be a nice addition...)
- Barbara