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OMY Ch. 13 - Playing With Fire
Playing With Fire
23 Dec 02 4:55 PM
Warnings: Crude sexual humor, blunt sexual talk
In which Gilda and Bilbo dance, Bargo is told he is not the dearest to Frodo's heart, and the boys have a very hot time.
A bunch of local OC farmers standing around yacking.
Re: OMY Ch. 13 - Playing With Fire
03 Mar 04 12:24 PM
Reply To: 2126
I've posted revisions through chapter 13, almost all of them dealing with wording & grammar. References to Merry are having the most changes to reflect the behavior of an older child. Big thanks to everyone who commented on the story so long ago - I've been feeling guilty for not putting your corrections into place sooner.
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