Yule Mathom Challenge 2005

December 4 - 21 ornery orcs

5. 21 Ornery Orcs Offended - by Dean Maia of Este

21 Ornery Orcs Offended

"I am Unsbrtuz and I want you to know I lead twenty-one of the toughest orcs in Agbang."

"Twenty." Someone yelled from the pack.


"Azak and Qartez hadda fight. Azak lost."

Unsbrtuz turned back to the Man he was trying to overwhelm. "Never mind him." Unsbrtuz sneered, "They is only you and this Elf-girl of yours to fight us. Give up and we take you to Morgoth, more or less whole."

They looked at each other and smiled. Beren drew his sword. Luthien cleared her throat. They left twenty-one neatly piled orc heads now looking more shocked than ornery.

This is a work of fan fiction, written because the author has an abiding love for the works of J R R Tolkien. The characters, settings, places, and languages used in this work are the property of the Tolkien Estate, Tolkien Enterprises, and possibly New Line Cinema, except for certain original characters who belong to the author of the said work. The author will not receive any money or other remuneration for presenting the work on this archive site. The work is the intellectual property of the author, is available solely for the enjoyment of Henneth Annûn Story Archive readers, and may not be copied or redistributed by any means without the explicit written consent of the author.

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Author: HASA Workshop

Status: General

Completion: Ongoing Serial

Rating: General

Last Updated: 01/10/06

Original Post: 12/03/05

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